Bonsai - first attempt to style a tree

I bought a little tree from the local supermarket and decided to try and style it.  This is my first styling and this is what I did.  Firstly, here is the tree:-

Chamaecypari pisifera

Apparently this variety isn't very good for bonsai but I didn't know that at the time but this is what I did with it.

This is what I have done so far.  I think some more needs to come off but will review it at a later date and just see how the tree grows for the time being.

Tree is potted up and this is how it looks now 5/2/12.

Tree in papercrete pot